Pain During Remembrance Redux - Pistols at Dawn Chapter 29
There will be two posts this month, covering both of the chapters. The word count when this was posted was 288, 132. I had only been to Bellac’s place once years ago, and it took me some time to remember the precise location of it; clearly, it was the last place he would stay. For a guy who's on equal footing, you sure do know little about him. You know everything about everyone and yet manage to remain in complete ignorance of them. Usually, it might be acceptable for a well-written, well rounded character, but Elysia has always been an awful one and this comes off as her being emotionally and neurologically stunted. Deserted, no living soul left in it and everything untouched since the morning when he left for the Brotherhood. Sheets of the bed swept aside for the early rise, a spare coat he hung by the bedframe in case it was cold. Crushed shells of nuts caked the windowsill, and language books stacked on his one desk of study where the notes were folded multiple times to the